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這個暑假,我參加吉他老師舉辦的成果發表會,地點在宜蘭的民宿,當天不僅有烤肉活動,還有一連串精彩的表演,我也有上台表演一曲,吉他老師說我表現得很棒!當天晚上我們還住在露營車內,雖然空間不大,但感覺還蠻有趣的!第二天,我們還吃了土雞大餐,之後又去泡了溫泉,讓我的暑假過得很充實!
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阿蔡:你的有一點台灣英文喔!
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但還是謝嚕!
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not only have a (grilled meat) activity
這個地方有點怪
Update 4:
小麥:我覺得你做的不錯!感謝你!
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這個暑假,我參加吉他老師舉辦的成果發表會,地點在宜蘭的民宿,當天不僅有烤肉活動,還有一連串精彩的表演,我也有上台表演一曲,吉他老師說我表現得很棒!當天晚上我們還住在露營車內,雖然空間不大,但感覺還蠻有趣的!第二天,我們還吃了土雞大餐,之後又去泡了溫泉,讓我的暑假過得很充實!
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稍微修正可以
標點可以改
切記
勿用翻譯機或是台灣英文!!
專家達人快來阿!
Update:
阿蔡:你的有一點台灣英文喔!
Update 2:
但還是謝嚕!
Update 3:
not only have a (grilled meat) activity
這個地方有點怪
Update 4:
小麥:我覺得你做的不錯!感謝你!
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地點在宜蘭的民宿,當天不僅有烤肉活動,還有一連串精彩的表演,= the location was in a B & B in Yilan. The activities was not only included barbeque, but also a lot of amazing performances.
我也有上台表演一曲,吉他老師說我表現得很棒!當天晚上我們還住在露營車內,雖然空間不大,但感覺還蠻有趣的!= I performed a song on the stage too, my guitar teacher said my performance was excellent! We stayed overnight in the camping car that night. Although the car space was not big, but it was quite fun.
第二天,我們還吃了土雞大餐,之後又去泡了溫泉,讓我的暑假過得很充實!
On the next day, we had local chicken meal, and then went for the hotspring, I had a great summer vacation.
希望對你有幫助。^_^
2009-07-19 13:07:56 補充:
更正:民宿 B&Bs 才對(在這裡的文法要用復數),少打了 s 在後面!
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