麻煩英文老師鼎力相助中翻英 - 開車

麻煩文法和語法平順
1.我心情鬱悶時會聽音樂。然後我的心情立刻會好轉起來。俗云：『孝是良藥』。不過，我認為音樂更是良藥。我對音樂的類型不甚挑剔，只要好聽就好。不過，一般而言，我還是比較喜歡爵士樂，因為這種音樂旋律好聽，可以讓你放輕鬆。經過一天勞累的工作之後，我最愛待在客廳裡，讓美妙的音樂洗淨我的疲憊及壓力。還有什麼事比聽音樂更好的呢？
I would like to listen to music when I depress. And then my mood became better soon. As the saying goes, ” Laughter is the best medicine”. I do not pick what type of music on, just is good. General speaking I prefer Jazz because the melody of music sounds smooth and makes you relaxed. After an exhausted work, I enjoy staying in a living room. Since listening to the wonderful music not only release my fatigue but also decline my stress. Nothing else deserves to listen to music?
2.在台灣開車很危險。車輛總是很多，也常看到車子在蛇行。車禍一直都在發生。每一年都有好幾千人因酒醉駕駛喪命。解決惡劣駕駛人這個問題一個方法就是對他們施以更重罰金或懲處。如果繼續違反交通規則的話，他們的駕照就應永遠吊銷。我知道這聽起來挺嚴峻的，但我相信唯有這樣做，我們才能改善台灣的交通。
Driving is very dangerous in Taiwan. Because there are plenty of vehicle and drivers weave in and out the traffic. Car accidents have been happening. Every year, there are several thousand of people died in drunk driving. The only way to solve the problem of some furious drivers is to get big fine or enforce heavy punishment. If people keep going to break traffic rules, their drivers’ licenses should be canceled. It sounds strict but I believe that we can improve Taiwan’s traffic by doing so.
Update:
乖乖牛你改得還不賴，有幾個地方問一下
1.我對音樂的類型不甚挑剔，音樂類型除了用the kind of, the type of , the sort of 還可用哪些
2. 為什麼 listen to music 還要加 the
3.讓美妙的音樂洗滌我的疲勞和壓力，還可用哪些動詞去替換啊
4. 施以更重的罰金和懲處，為什麼要改成這樣啊
5. 最後一個問題，我想精簡文章但文法要對而且內容要合乎題義

I cannot accept your compliment, because my English is not good.
3Q very much
Update 2:
乖乖牛
我所說的是句子簡潔有力，不拖泥帶水，明確表達句子涵義
並不是真的要縮減篇幅，修改是讓後續的故事更有可看性和內涵
Update 3:
純羽
你翻得也很不錯可是
我查過英英字典沒有 listen to 『the music 只有 listen to music
還有需要你的修改版可分批 copy 貼上來